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In the middle of his sentence, Marius' gaze becomes fixated on your phone screen.
In the middle of his sentence, Marius' gaze becomes fixated on your phone screen.


A new exhibition advertisement pops up on the screen—Fantastical Art Exhibition: "Blurry Days and Nights" by Cyrus Caddell, a new prominent painter.
A new exhibition advertisement pops up on the screen—Fantastical Art Exhibition: "Blurry Days and Nights" by Cyrus Brown, a new prominent painter.


{{SL|You|Are you interested?}}
{{SL|You|Are you interested?}}
You follow the guide on the screen and browse the details page with Marius.
You follow the guide on the screen and browse the details page with Marius.


{{SL|Marius|Cyrus Caddell is a very talented young painter.}}
{{SL|Marius|Cyrus Brown is a very talented young painter.}}
{{SL|Marius|His works are full of his own strong individualistic style, and his simple painting techniques make people feel the richness of his inner life.}}
{{SL|Marius|His works are full of his own strong individualistic style, and his simple painting techniques make people feel the richness of his inner life.}}
{{SL|Marius|The title of the exhibition "Blurry Days and Nights" is the name of his first artwork. However... It's also the name of his last work before his death.}}
{{SL|Marius|The title of the exhibition "Blurry Days and Nights" is the name of his first artwork. However... It's also the name of his last work before his death.}}
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{{SL|You|The last work before his death? You mean, this painter is...?}}
{{SL|You|The last work before his death? You mean, this painter is...?}}
{{SL|Marius|Cyrus Caddell was born with congenital liver dysfunction... He passed away a month ago.}}
{{SL|Marius|Cyrus Brown was born with congenital liver dysfunction... He passed away a month ago.}}
{{SL|Marius|But... Even when the physical body perishes, the artist still lives on in spirit through the world's admiration.}}
{{SL|Marius|But... Even when the physical body perishes, the artist still lives on in spirit through the world's admiration.}}
{{SL|Marius|A painter as good as Cyrus Caddell will surely be remembered by the world.}}
{{SL|Marius|A painter as good as Cyrus Brown will surely be remembered by the world.}}
{{SL|You|You seem to think highly of him.}}
{{SL|You|You seem to think highly of him.}}
{{SL|Marius|I admire his work. By the way, I bought the book Blurry Days and Night. Do you want to take a look?}}
{{SL|Marius|I admire his work. By the way, I bought the book Blurry Days and Night. Do you want to take a look?}}
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{{SL|You|It is quite interesting.}}
{{SL|You|It is quite interesting.}}
{{SL|Marius|It looks like a children's book at first, but in fact, there are many interactive puzzles and even metaphors hidden inside.}}
{{SL|Marius|It looks like a children's book at first, but in fact, there are many interactive puzzles and even metaphors hidden inside.}}
{{SL|Marius|Some people say it is Cyrus Caddell's personal biography. The main character of the picture book is a young man who is eager to seek out the divine bird—it's the epitome of Cyrus Caddell himself.}}
{{SL|Marius|Some people say it is Cyrus Brown's personal biography. The main character of the picture book is a young man who is eager to seek out the divine bird—it's the epitome of Cyrus Brown himself.}}
{{SL|Marius|The clues buried in the picture book also point to the life that Cyrus Caddell originally envisioned but couldn't have due to his illness.}}
{{SL|Marius|The clues buried in the picture book also point to the life that Cyrus Brown originally envisioned but couldn't have due to his illness.}}
{{SL|Marius|But... After I read it a few times, I feel that these critics are not quite right.}}
{{SL|Marius|But... After I read it a few times, I feel that these critics are not quite right.}}
{{SL|You|How?}}
{{SL|You|How?}}
{{SL|Marius|I don't think this picture book is really from the first-person point of view, rather... Narrating the story from a perspective of an onlooker.}}
{{SL|Marius|I don't think this picture book is really from the first-person point of view, rather... Narrating the story from a perspective of an onlooker.}}
{{SL|Marius|Moreover, the puzzles and clues left in the picture book have a very clear direction, like... a message written to someone.}}
{{SL|Marius|Moreover, the puzzles and clues left in the picture book have a very clear direction, like... a message written to someone.}}
{{SL|Marius|If I have the chance, I'd love to solve all the puzzles in the book and see what Cyrus Caddell was trying to convey.}}
{{SL|Marius|If I have the chance, I'd love to solve all the puzzles in the book and see what Cyrus Brown was trying to convey.}}
As you listen to Marius' introduction to the picture book and Cyrus Caddell, you suddenly get an idea.
As you listen to Marius' introduction to the picture book and Cyrus Brown, you suddenly get an idea.


{{SL|You|Why don't we go to the art exhibition together? I'd also like to learn more about Cyrus Caddell and buy a picture book to study.}}
{{SL|You|Why don't we go to the art exhibition together? I'd also like to learn more about Cyrus Brown and buy a picture book to study.}}
{{SL|Marius|Okay, I'll ask Payton to prepare lunch, and we'll go after that.}}
{{SL|Marius|Okay, I'll ask Payton to prepare lunch, and we'll go after that.}}
{{SL|You|Good idea!}}
{{SL|You|Good idea!}}
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